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Sunday, May 16, 2010

Svengali- The Novel Part Two

Svengali Part 2- The Novel- Aftermath

After the initial shock the detective pushed the lifeless body off him. Because of his strength the body hurled immediately onto the steering wheel setting off the horn. The Detective quickly grabbed her hair and pulled the corpse off it. The body slumped back onto the seat and as he reclined both faces met. He looked at her for a moment. Both eyes gazing. "What the hell happened" he said as blood trickled down her porcelain skin. Then a mournful moan escaped from her mouth with a deafening level. Svengali leaped out of the car. " Shit! Shit! Shit!" he screamed " Okay man get a hold of yourself..you are in the middle of nowhere with a dead girl that you may or may not have murdered. You know your typical Friday Morning." He caught his reflection in the car window. This is not the face of a murderer he assured himself.  He was about to get back into he car when a large voice bellowed " Hey Mister okay?"
" Yes I am fine."
" Car Problems dude? You need a jump or something ?" he asked
"Nothing I cannot take care of man, Thanks for your concern."
The man noticed the body in drivers seat
"You guys having a fight or something?'
"Yeah something like that." The Detective countered
"Well make sure she knows who's the boss." he said as he drove away
"Fucking asshole." Svengali muttered as he went to open the car door. He noticed his hand was covered in blood and immediately wiped it on his shirt. His hand started to shake uncontrollably. Usually when it did this it meant he was needing more alcohol but not this time. He was scared - terrified to be exact and he knew it. His heart started racing and it felt like it was going to pop out of his chest. He hated not being in control of his feelings and bashed his head against the car to numb the sensation. This worked for a moment but his left hand still shook. He looked at it and noticed there was a certain motion to it. A rhythm that seemed choreographed. As he watched the hand gestures became broader and faster. It looked as though it was writing something.He rushed back into the car and searched the glove compartment. There he found a pen and then retrieved a parking ticket that was on the car's floor. He situated himself in the car and placed the ticket on the dashboard. He placed the pen in his hand and placed it on the ticket. He watched in disbelief as the pen took off writing on the ticket. Then as soon as it started it stopped. He dropped the pen and brought the ticket to his face and read it."

Deketive OMG! What are you doingg? gEt outt of theres kuick. u have to leAve. tAke the kar and Drive Now!!!!

He looked in astonishment at the writings. It couldn't be he thought. She is dead. He felt a wave of sorrow overcoming him and he began to shake uncontrollably. Then with all his might he threw the ticket to the ground and said.
"Alright calm the fuck down. You are in shock. You have a dead girl in the car and you think Daisy is writing to you from beyond. Fucking stop it Svengali."
With intense speed he grabbed the lifeless body and threw it in the back. He took her place and started the engine and drove off. Yes he thought to himself he was in shock and things right now did not make sense. But what was just written was correct he had to get out of there and fast.

3 comments:

  1. John this is so damn good you really have a knack for writing!!! I love this!!!!

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  2. Excellant John!! Can't wait for the next chapter! Very intense & suspenseful with just the right amount of the occult. Stephen King move to the left a bit cuz John is the nest "King" of suspense & horror!!! Luv Ya Darlin' ~ Sister Cat ♥♥

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  3. Really John, you're too good. :). You actually need to release a book so I can buy it xD

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